WEEK 1 / DRAFT 1

*I’ve reached the limit to upload on Vimeo for today so I’ll reupload the video of my first draft later

FEEDBACK

• Bring the audience into your specific topic of erotic imagery rather than starting with a general introduction about seeing the world.
• Incorporate the effective use of cutouts and framing, as seen in the second part of the video, to translate the publication into a visually engaging video format
• Slow down the pace when showing your work, particularly when flipping through the pages of your book
• Provide a clearer context for your work, focus more on exploring the creation of erotic imagery from initially non-erotic subjects or objects
• Articulate the techniques you use, such as masking, cropping, and different contextualizations of images to create erotic imagery
• Discuss why you incorporate elements that allow for interaction, such as making certain images 3D
• Emphasize that eroticism is about suggestion rather than explicitness. Connect references to your work and explain how they align with this concept